The second, lower voice was much better in my ears. Love the delivery in version two of 'as punishment for eating on my couch.' If you're using a bass filter, you may have to individually select the segments of words and ignore the empty space, or do better noise reduction control. If you're using 'change pitch' then run noise reduction BEFORE you alter the pitch or you will get a heap of extra background noise. Love your voice, the audio quality could use a few quirks. If you want some help with it, PM me an unedited sample and I'll try editing to see if we can get you there with that mic? [I know some people are better, but hey, it's free. Just like your work.]