SHAPIN' UP (Pilot)
Ninjawalters for Ricktangle
Ricktangle (Rick-tangle) is a hotheaded, loud , short tempered person. He has little time for things that doesn't benefit him, and often won't do anything that doesn't. He often rages and yells at his friends, but he has his moments of truly caring for the people around him.
For a little inspiration, look at Benson from Regular Show. (example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y45fmbWvBXQ)
[Squarry is pestering you]
(Annoyed, yelling)
Okay fine! If it'll shut you up for five minutes we'll go out!! ….My GOD!!
[After getting soda spilled on you]
(Yelling, raging)
And who the hell needs two large sodas anyway!!? How much does a person need to drink!!?
(Disappointed, angry)
What the- Awww, Hot dogs!? I freaking HATE Hotdogs!!
I like this, but it seems like you're holding back a bit. If you can, try going to a small enclosed area, like a closet, and take a blanket with you the thicker the better (to help drown out more outside noise*) Then when you're under the blanket, JUST GO HAM. I mean really get ANGRY. YOU HATE HOTDOGS! Best of luck!
Thanks! I could tell when recording that I was having trouble committing to that line. I will give that a shot!