Incredible voice! You'd make a great narrator for space operas and historical documentaries. I think you can afford to be a bit more dramatic when talking about wars and humanity being divided. That would really give edge to your delivery.

You conveyed some great character choices here. I could picture you as an evil queen or one who Had to be bad due to the constraints of power.

I like your pacing! It feels like a well-paced intro to a video game, something I've heard many people say about the script that I can really attribute here! This actually reminds me of a game called Baten Kaitos where the intro is read by a wise woman. I would personally like to see you continuously add emotion to the various aspects of the script, so we see more of that wisdom. Keep adding layers to your character so there is never just one thing. Are they a resentful wise individual? A small layer like that can affect your entire read, you made a standout choice here and I think that's wonderful. Keep building.