I like your voice, but you should work on trimming your audio a bit, like cutting out any portion (aside from your "This is my audition..." tag) where you are not reading any of the listed lines, it will shorten the length of you audition file and streamline your audio as well. If this is a byproduct of your software- get a new one, I use Audacity it's free and has a bunch of tools to help make recording and editing smoother as well as being able to highlight and remove audio within the recording. Good luck! (I'll be posting the same comment on your other audition for this project)