Not bad not bad :) Definitely a solid start, but I do have a couple notes. For his first line, I'd suggest trying to add a bit more of a sinister calm to his voice. Second line was pretty solid all around. Third one, I think you could come across a little more somber or regretful to help really sell the intended emotion behind the line. Hope that helps :) PS. How did you do that Mando filter? I've been trying to figure that effect out for ages lol