Soul Eater The Visit (5M, 5F, 2M/F)
Blitzbombstudios for Ragnarok
Voice Type: Moderately High, Scratchy, Slightly Nasal, Crass, Ill-Tempered, Vulgar
Bio: The creature that lives inside Crona's body while it was originally a large buff vile monster that would devour all kinds of human souls. But now its a much smaller creature who is more of an obnoxious pest that frequently abuses Crona and harass anyone else nearby. Ragnarok also has some rather lewd tendencies in which this story will play up a bit more.
1. (Annoyed) Do you have any idea how many times I had to sit here and watch these two get in their sickeningly sweet cute-fests they keep doing? It makes me want to tear my hair out.
2. (Trying to be civil, demanding) But I suppose I am getting a little too hungry to argue some more, so Tsubaki make with the grub there sweet cheeks!3. (Gleefully taunting Maka, before getting KOed by a Frying Pan) Oh what’s the matter Maka, sore that Crona gets to know what a woman’s breast feels like? Of course I can get Crona to feel you up there Maka but there wouldn’t be much “point” to that huh? AHAHAHAHAHAHA! *whack* ACK!
4. (Indignant) Oh don’t even bother trying to act stern there Soul you little punk. You probably wouldn’t mind getting your hands on Tsubaki’s melons huh?5. (Smug, Mocking) So let me get this straight here, this little mental midget thinks that panties are just frilly caps? Hey Tsubaki have you been putting lead paint chips in his breakfast cereal?
6. (Gleefully perverted) So Miss Ninja Girl here likes to go commando huh?
+ Your delivery is pretty good overall, I liked how you did Line 6. - No offence but I said "Moderately High" not "Moderately Low" voice is a bit too gruff, granted the voice could fit Ragnarok's larger original form though but still. Still this was fairly good.