Female Drill Lieutenant
Dori "LdyDrgnflm" Murdock for Lieutenant Audrey Zim
A drill instructor. No nonsense, but does have a sense of humor. Hard as nails but not cruel.
"All right, droolies, listen up. As of this moment you are beginning basic training. I am Lieutenant Audrey Zim. You will address me as Lieutenant Zim or Ma’am, and you will treat me with the respect you will show to every officer while at the Academy. When asked a question, you will respond yes ma’am or no ma’am. Is that understood?"
"Oh, he did, but before that, he dressed me down but good. (imitating Frankel) “Zim why was Draper just in here, ready to resign? You’re supposed to keep them going!” Well, obviously I reminded him that we couldn’t hang on to them all. “NOT DRAPER!! He just needs a kick in the pants. I know him. I know his father. I know his grandfather. I know what they are capable of, if you just motivate them right. I’m not supposed to show favoritism, but dammit I owe his father!”
It took me a while to hear where your voice was coming from, as it is different from the original. This is not a bad thing, and actually expected. There is one spot in the script where you will need to shout with authority: Zim: (with authority) YOU DID WHAT, DRAPER?! Dipper: (automatic response) I PROPOSED, MA'AM! This gets the entire squadron into the secret, and should be very funny. Assuming I get no other auditions, I will be getting back to you.