Session 2
ManuelFluency for Homework
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
So I don't actually think you were too fast until you got to the phone number. The phone number needs to be a lot slower. I think you have a ton of energy that I'd personally direct you to shave just a hair off of. The recording is also a little loud. I'm going to say something weird... The over all effect is that you're riding an untrained horse and it's bucking everywhere but you're still on it and mostly seem ok. I think a little more control over the script and you've got 90% of what you need here. The other little things are two words that weren't clear (educators and video). Also when you said the 8th it sounded like you were surprised. Like someone just jumped out at you! All in all I think you're going the right direction and I really liked it.
Wow really? it was too loud? It seems I am a loud speaker then hahaha. Thanks for your detailed advice! I really appreciate it! :D
Yes, too fast for sure. I LOVE your happy bright energy though - you have so much fun in you - i can't wait to unleash you. I love your happy and I love your fun accent. It has fun attached to it naturally. I would like you to slow down and not feel you have to be OVER BRIGHT - I like you bright - so don't get me wrong but it comes across a bit over the top so just watch that was well. YOu're likely like me, we're a super bright personality and it's just naturally there no matter what we do so we dont have to do anything to push it. Can't wait to hear more from you.
Thanks for your feedback! :D