Johit I LOVE your first 10 seconds! You did a great job in the start. It did sound like you ran out of air on Thorton. Your energy does drop off and you sound a little bored until the free lunch. You're excitement on free lunch makes me want to come see what the free lunch is! I noticed that you read the phone number as fiftytwo on both passes. Mat did the same. Is that a European English thing? My last critique is the "and" before the last fiftytwo. I wouldn't say it's bad. I just noticed it. Good Job my friend!

I actually love your accent and just want to keep working within it. You have this great muffled tone to your voice - which makes it unique and i love the approachability in your personality - it just cuts through even if you aren't adding smiley energy. I really look forward to directing you more - I can hear some GREAT potential using your accent....so while I also want you to work with a US dialect coach - I don't want you to ever lose your accent as I think we will find some homes for it. I think this needs a bit of direction to get it a bit more personal and fun and conversational, but I love your base instrument and can't wait to watch you grow.