I think the voice was warm. Maybe too fake friendly (so may sound detached). My voice seems to have this cheeks full sound. I didn't notice it before submitting but I hear it now. And its bugging me. I can also hear where I slowed down because my brain lapsed while reading. Not sure if it is coming out that way because I know its there, or its actually there. Overall, I think I lacked emotion.

Great listening and assessment. You have some very nice presence and delivery so it's got lot's going on for it too. A bit fake, but not bad. A bit quick in not letting some words have their resonance before moving on, but overall this has a nice conversational approach. IF the listener was there in front of you, how different would your emotional state be? I like that this lands in a realm of realism and you are positive and helpful without being pushy/salesy.