Keep working on that enunciation. It needs to be brought under control. When you speak softer, your enunciation seem to get better. This is the opposite of what I usually expect. Practice more with the cork to help you shape your words better. There is quite a bit of anger in your disgust take. I would had liked to hear one of your anger lines fully shouted. Where there are multiple lines like that, it is a good idea to show as much of your range as you can.