Hey my friend - lol - Love where the character is but it needed more dynamics - it just came in out of no where off your slate and it all stayed in a repetitive way - LOVED this choice I just would want some change ups in there. There was some great discovery in fear - and I love the characters that are dying to come out in you. The fear scene didn't feel as rushed so I loved that you were reacting to things more. I like the idea again of disgust. There is something so fun about your characters here - just again needs more dynamics - so from now on -stick with your choices but make sure you give me variety in them - quiet for one section - contained another - explosive for a minute etc. That's all you are missing is dynamics.