Session 7
Andre Ricarte for Homework
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
Hey Andre - thank you so much for your slate. You've got the right idea here. Love the repeat - if you - if you - keeps it nice an organic. You did it again in Fear so that is a clever technique to make it sound real. I feel however in your anger that the character knew everything that was happening to him. There was no discovery on things happening to him in the moment so we will work on that. Loved what you did with fear - you took me on a journey in the fear so i really loved that and loved how you used breath and changed it up. PERFECT. Disgust is okay - it just feels fast and that the character is just trying to get it over with - which is a decent choice - but I think with a bit of direction you would see there are some moments you can play with so it doesn't just feel like a rush. Some good stuff in here.