Hey Johit..... You are such a sweet guy - getting mad is not your specialty and I assume it's because you are a very kind person who doesn't express a ton of negative emotions. I feel that there is some great concentration on your words and making sure they are clear - which is awesome. I want you to keep focusing on this for sure, but what is happening right now is that it all feels very disjointed. I loved your ending however - "I feel sorry for you". you have beautiful empathy in you and when we are in intimate emotions I think you will connect to them well, however intense emotions will not come as easy to you as others, so we just need to find a happy medium for you. Most importantly we need to get a bit more fluidity in your reads so that it doesn't feel like you are READING the copy - but rather experience it. I love your dedication and hard work - so keep it up. Clarity matters however while you do have an accent, lets play with that and make it a strength. Outside of class time I want you to keep focusing on the american accent (I have some great coaches I can refer you to) but I also want you to be able to let go in character - so don't be afraid of that either - keep up the hard work

I love that it sounded like you were taking a different emotional path. Most people went angry and hysterical but yours felt remorseful and hurt. I'd love to hear a little bit of change in the speed. That would add some more depth for me. Good work!