Loved to hear you taking some risks and playing with your words. This is the way to discover so keep that up. Some of it will work and some will be a bit too pushed - that happened in this case. BUT LOVE THAT YOU ARE TAKING THESE RISKS Love that gasp you gave me in fear - that was great - those little moments really help bring it to life. I think you have a great handle on what you're supposed to be doing - if anything what happens is that you work extremely hard so it will come across in the odd spot as a bit forced - OMG loved what you did with disgust. I agree with you - it felt the most organic and I LOVED IT!!! Good work on disgust - loved that you could hear the difference in connection as well - that is awesome - if you can hear it, then you are that much closer to nailing this stuff - good work my friend