Slayers the Motion Picture Alternate End Scene
dani for Naga the Serpent
Voice Type: Moderate to Moderately Low, Sultry, Boastful, Slightly Regal
Reference Clip: http://picosong.com/zhDk/
Bio: This lady from the Slayers movies is a capable sorceress but is well known as a Big Eater, Heavy Drinker and loves to show off her highly voluptious figure in her scantly-clad outfit. Naga loves to think of herself as Lina's rival though the feeling isn't mutual as Lina's magic abilities can easily overpower hers. (However Naga also loves to mock Lina's "A-Cup Angst" issues as she brags about how well-endowed and shapely she is compared to Lina.) But still she and Lina are friends but they have a virtiolic friendship (emphasis on vitriolic).
1. (Cheerful though Facetious) Hello Lina
2. (Faux-Sympathetic and Pompous) Then there was Rinse, who had that shiny blue hair. While she and Loofa do have a bit more of a body than you ever would she would seem rather plain compared to someone like me so I am leaving her behind. But that’s not such a bad thing why I am practically doing her a favor since I would just make her look so plain compared to me.3. (Gleefully mocking tone) Oh yes quite, it’s nice that I get to be with a young woman with a body about as perfect as mine who practically adores me, rather than some flat-chested little girl who can be quite the temperamental little brat. Ah yes it’s so nice to have a far prettier and more womanly traveling partner for once Lina. Ohohohohohohoho! Oh we will have so much fun together later.
4. (Defensive and a little whiny) I… I was being facetious that night Lina! You know very well how arrogant I can be!5. (Offended and Shocked) Oh you have gone too far this time Lina! How dare you use my laugh against me?!
6. (Excited and a little flirty) So I’ll be getting good cooked meals and all the booze I can drink with you, oh Shampoo I knew there was a reason why I really liked you.
Okay, this is my take No.2. I hope it is more to your liking!
Indeed it is, granted you didn't quite get the infamous laugh (hear the reference clip) but that is a relatively minor issue but other than that this is a strong improvement.