I will be trying my pick-up lines to help me practice for script 2 -It’s a good thing I have my library card, because I am totally checking you out. 😀

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Love the slate AND the detailed writeup. You really work hard and are self critical. It's paying off, just continue to strive and be kind to yourself. SARCASM: Great pace a fun sublet approach to not offend but play with the wording to convey playfulness. FLIRTY: Love the pace and spontaneity. Great focus not the listener. FLAT: This was really nice, just the mic/power was quite low. When you're doing lower volume/power, look at the wav form to see if we're getting much more than a flat line so that when we have it cracked all the way up we do get a good amount of volume. Just a tech pice but really solid delivery.