Nice slate Rachel! 1: Really? I think this is well paced and nice varied anger tones. Big start, great shift of focus. This spits venom. Always good to recognize that it can go further with more defined 5w's and exploring within tho. 2: Great urgent fear and love the whisper level for variance, feels connected and is engaging. 3: Love the life sounds at 1:10 giving us more insight into how bad it is, and the progression to the end really feels alive and reactive. Nice work!