Nice succinct slate. #1: Good expressive range and great pace. Watch the 2 1st sentence endings being the same. #2: Nice fear affect in the breath/body. Keep it evolving tho, starts to sound too similar line after line. Remind yourself of the 5w's and then live and react within them as it grows/evolved. #3: some good disgust energy, love "nasty". Consider how being disgusted by the imagined "grossness" makes you feel. Does it smell? Is it a tactile disgust? Etc to open it up and allow the body to react and give you more pronounced DISGUST expression at times when it's affected you more.