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Thanks Brian, nice slate #1: feeling a little safe/reserved overall. Raise the stakes. What are the 5W's so that it matters more. You're "angry" possibly going to off yourself, it'll need to feel like that's where it's gotten to. #2: Glad that there was time to be affected by this situation at the end after the pause. I'd love to have a bit more palpable fear in the early part to really help sell the scene and fear. #3: Great life sounds! Great pace and focus on the listener and responsive to the imagined "grossness". Solid.