Thanks Kyle, nice slate :) Thanks for adding such fun sounds/effects! #1: Watch the focus, when you're yelling at "them" it feels cold, like no one IS there. It's hard, but imagine what they look like, what just happened, what they are doing while you yell at them so "YOU" can react to all of that live too. #2: Nice breath and energy on the emotion. Great fear feels. Still a bit safe/calculated. For vulnerability be less polished and "rehearsed" feeling. Keep the 5W's in mind and try to react in real time as you go through it. #3: Ha fantastic sound work! I thought maybe you swallowed the fly near the end! Till I heard it again. Love the disgust in your body causing such big reactions and life sounds too. Very nice.