loved the emotion in the first script but it was a little to loud. the second script really feels like your zone. do believe the third script could of had a little more energy. but love the recording overall

That sounded good! You did a great job of making it feel personal by mixing different emotions together to make it somewhat of your own twist to the script. It also felt like you were talking to me instead of at me so great job on that as well.

Thanks, nice slate! #1: you're so powerful you're mic/setup can't handle it. If you have no gain control on your equipment, try turning it down a good 20% on the recording program to see if you can limit peaking. Such nice intensity, very affected. Great pace and really feel the tension. I'd take a beat after "gone mad?" so that you and us can adjust to the new reaction. #2: Very raw and engaging read. Great pace and really love the life sounds and honesty of the fear crying. #3: Great measured pace! Love how you really sound like someone it there to talk to. Love the life sounds and affect it starts having on you.