Hey Para....thank you so much. Lets play with your slates. Listen you have this awesome suave flavor to you - Give me your next slate flirtatiously. DONT ANNOUNCE your name, love you and show me how incredible you are - be cocky, sarcastic, playful, sensual, any of the above. This isnt' necessarily the BE ALL of slates for you - as it will likely please the women more than the men but I want you to play around with how you say your name - that's really all that matters the most is having some fun with saying your name. So just an advanced direction I would offer you. You did a good job but it's a bit pushed. YOU SHINE in your intimacy. That doesn't mean you cant get a bit bigger/bolder in a moment here and there but not throughout. Loved the Sigh - Don't go kim.....more of that would be awesome for sure. as soon as it came down from there I liked that - then you go back to pushing a bit - you just don't need to - you have this beautiful natural storyteller in you - so when you try to show it - it will come across that way. Interesting - now you're playing and it becomes a bit forced. Your strength is your natural pocket - that is your money maker. I would want to direct you in this a bit so you can hear more of what I mean but it's important for you to try some things out so I can help give you the permission slips you need to stand out.