Hey courtney - LOVED Don't you DAAARE - that's the key not staying in the same place - changing it up. You did a good job here. I want you to play even more in dynamics - you've got a great start here though - but whisper one moment, faster the next, slow down the next, dramatic pause, a laugh, sarcasm - Loved that you changed up at the tears as well - just give a small taste of it - not too much (you pretty much did that) so you have a really nice base to work with - you understand journey and take me on it - which is great so now it's just adding more dynamic layers to help add to what you're already doing to build the scene. Good work