I forgot to slate!

Woah, this is really impressive!

Hey Bella - thanks for noticing the slate - all good - not the competition LOL - Great to hear you again. Nice opening (as an advanced direction have some kind of sound to bring you in to the scene - we'll talk about this more in future classes but it would add to the passion of the scene) I like it when you take it down for a moemnt (Well I'm scared too) You stay in the YELL alot but you do go in and out of the intimate a bit so that's great. Allow whisper to come in, allow a dramatic pause, allow sarcasm to come in, some humor - so all advanced things to add that you will learn about throughout this course however these are the things that will have it stand out that much more. It's good but you stay in a similar tWO emotions throughout - so we'll learn to add even more layers as we grow together. Good stuff