Your voice is great! It really sounds professional! I'm not sure if this was just the style you were going for, but to me this ad seems to be more energetic, meanwhile your voice sounds more narrative.

Great clarity there. My three feedback are as follows: 1. The two reads sounds almost identical in style and pacing, so I am only presented with one style. Don't be shy to experiment with other reading speeds and emotions. 2. The 2nd read, the last paragraph sounded different in terms of either quality or reading approach and it caught me off guard. 3. My third feedback is about the editing. The flow of the read feels very rushed in between lines likely due to the editing. As you mentioned, you're working of your vocal endurance so when you've improved in that area, I believe it'll sound smoother and an easier flow to it without excessive clipping of lines.

Thanks for the feedback guys! I hope I can improve on the next one!

You have such a nice voice! Very solid take. The read did feel a tad rushed, but I think it's mostly because of the way you edited it. Commercial reads do have a similar kind of editing process where everything it put together rapidly, but it sounded unnatural because of the slower pace of your voice (not a bad "slow," but just slower than how the editing makes it seem it should be). The performance was super fun to listen to! Maybe add just a bit more energy by using more of your body to really bring the heat. Overall, nicely done!