This was a well-paced take. I like how you took your time and did not try to get the audition over with. But what caught my attention was that it seemed as though you were switching between two different characters between the paragraphs and some sentences. For example, when you said the line "No cash? No problem. No kidding! No fuss, no muss, no risk, no obligation" you sounded like an enthusiastic commercial salesman. But then there's a switch at "no red tape, no down payment, No entrée fee, no hidden charges..." and you sound like a very laid-back friend having a casual conversation with the listener. All in all, great work!

Nice job! I do feel that you were going just a tad too fast for the purposes of the performance, especially near the beginning and at random points in the script. While speed in and of itself is not a bad thing, I do feel that your voice could have been clearer if you slowed it down even a little bit. Let's talk energy: sometimes I could feel a spike in your energetic performance, but then at other times it would fall back down. Try to keep up that powerful and passionate energy all the way through the script consistently! Good stuff.