I can only hear it in my left ear, but I love your energy.

Hey Nanaabavo - Not sure your name - give me a slate next time if you don't mind. I LOVE YOUR OPENING LINE - gritted teeth, almost shaky in her tone. Great emotion to start. I love that you're not afraid to show emotion - thanks for going there. I totally get your choices, but I think she stays in the whiney too much - it's a great choice but just a splash of it - she begs him to listen the whole time - so she loses any confidence or control. Again great choice for a moment but not to stay in that the whole time. We want to change our volumes and our emotional contexts - internalizing more would have helped. I think you gave some really good FEELING here - but it had almost all the same feeling - so as we grow you will discover how to offer more variety in the feelings while still being effective but with no patterns or predictability. Love your emotion - look forward to seeing what you can do