I like your diction. Your words are all very clear. I’d love to hear more of that energy! ⭐️

Hey Andre - thanks for the slate. I can tell that you could have the tendency to have slight vocal compromise (slurred words) but you've done a GREAT job keeping it clear and organic to the copy at the same time - so good work - keep at it. I loved your opening - it was almost slurred but not - so it works and I liked your passion. I might have directed a couple choices just before GOOEY and that part - only because you're still yelling at her and I would have liked some slight change ups in there - I know you take it right down after Kim Wait - which is great. And then it builds again towards the end which is also a great choice. I think that some things felt just a little bit READ out vs natural, but so borderline - I think you're coming along nicely and it's only going to get better and better. good stuff