Great work! It was fast at first, but I love how you were able to pace it down, and it sounds very genuine in the second half.

Hey Roderick - such a kind and polite slate- Next time I want you to just say hi, then your name - and remember you are talking to me so be fun with your name. I know you are living character who loves to have fun - I can tell that already so don't be afraid to have some fun with your name. I loved that you took it down after KIM WAIT. Nice and intimate. Great to hear you can switch like that. I loved that switch but it stays in the exact same emotion to the end. I LOVE the less is more of it - but there should still be a journey in that less is more - so just a bit more variety inside that but loved how intimate you went. Some good choices