This is a fun read to listen to! The 2nd act though felt more a quick read than having a character to it.

I like the unique feel you brought to this script! I rarely ever hear someone bring multiple characters/voices to the same submission. I do think that because you focused so much on the voice, your articulation sometimes suffered a bit and your words tended to be harder to understand. Make sure that, if you are to add fun voices, you prioritize that clarity. Overall though, 95% of it was clear and well-structured! Keep up that powerful breathing and natural tone. Nicely done! - Joe, CC TA