Great slate - and thank you for the personal greeting - so nice. I am BEYOND overwhelmed but I have been here many times LOL I just know I have no life until December. LOL Thank you for doing the homework. Loved that you have two completely different reads/characters. I find the second read is a bit too character and a narration client will be more prone to hire your first read - once worked on for background etc., than they would this character as he is not professional now, instead he is bitter and so now the product becomes bitter and negative - and so that is not likely the direction the client would go. The character's voice also changes at the end and his GRUFF is gone - back where I want it though lol. NOW that all being said, all that matters is that you connect to the character and the story you created and I really felt that you did. It made it very interesting and unique - a bit over the top at times, but it added some interest. I would just avoid too many NEGATIVE storylines when it comes to narration/corporate - this is more what we'd see in an animation. So fun character for animation. Good work and way to take some risks - this is the place to do so