Hey cutey- thank you so much, I love your story line. You hae the right idea however you are a little OVER the top in some of the ways you are pushing - I love that you're more approachable - that's the right idea. Try and imagine someone responding to what you say, so it allows you a bit less CLOSED OFF SENTENCES - Although your energy is great and fun, there is a way to get a bit more natural in there to set this apart...so we will continue to work on that. (You made a few of the judges shortlist on UVOS - so great work my friend - I was so proud of you - that's a huge feat out of 1823 auditions so be super proud. We haven't picked the top 30 yet so stay tooned - just wanted you to know that your hard work is paying off)