I can see why you were confident it was definitely a solid read. At end of the day we're all improving ourselves so try not beat yourself up too much about. As long as you keep striving you'll make it I promise.

Thanks for your personal thoughts on this too. It can be hard to appreciate what we are doing well. Good work on making the text feel important. Great pace. Watch clarity at "There will always be challenges..." I like the intimacy of this. Great job taking the breathing time you need. Sometimes it feels like we aren't doing "enough" but that's usually a good choice as over cooking it makes it sound really fake. So while this might be quite similar throughout, I didn't find you were monotonous or disinterested.