This was great! I actually really liked the smugness at the end, it felt like you were rubbing it in the face of your competitors, as if they were beneath you. My one big critique would probably be the fast pace of your first script. The excited feeling was perfect, but the words seemed to run into each other, to the point it might be detrimental for the listener's understanding. All in all though you did good, I look forward to hearing more of your work!

Ha great choices :) #1: love this character and they are delightfully eccentric. Very powerful tho, so mic technique/gain reduce so you can get it all cleanly. Love it! #2: Quite the edge! Anger is very powerful in here. Really love the pace and beats you take to express yourself.