Wow! Keep it up, getting started up as a voice actor is definitely no easy feat ^^ Only things I have to critic on it really just comes with experience which I'm sure you'll get in no time, as well as work on the quality of sound. I know it's hard with a Headset, but peaking and clipping make audio almost impossible to use. You don't have to spend hundreds on a microphone or an interface, especially if you're just starting out. Take your time, get experience and learn tips and tricks via YouTube or other sites. Keep up the good work and keep getting that experience ^^ You'll do great!