Good job! I liked the anger in the second script. As for the first script, I think you are on point with your self-critique. Still though, I can hear your voice skills coming through. Keep at it!

#1: Some nice moments here. Overall I feel that you aren't that interested, and so we have a harder time feeling that it matters. Watch clarity ~8s mark. #2: love the rage and energy. Good pacing, really allowing you to give strong performance. Very aggressive and the breath and body affect compliments it, some great representation here and glad it has more to reach for when you choose to.