Fantastic write up! #1: Way to really enjoy this, love the scene you've given us in the writeup. Make sure the breaths off the line have a tiny space before and after that is silence so that you'd be able to edit those out for client. It's ok for the energy of the emotion to give you more pacing options as it affects you and gives you something to react to in your imagined 5W's. #2: Again, nice scene building! Watch clarity at ~52s. Love the disdain and regret, and that mockery at the end. Great add on improv too. There is a lot of great moments in here that feel grounded and affected as it evolved during the performance. Nice choices.

Your reads were both very unexpected and dynamic. Loved hearing your creative choices :)

I definitely heard the voice of someone who had an empty bottle of alcohol in hand. You had an idea for your characters and you saw it through. Good work.