I realized after I wrote this whole thing that when they use the word "styles" it also shows they are more corporate.

Great notes here Birdie - thank you so much. Good insight and homework. LOVE YOUR SLATE - thank you - Loved your opening and love where your character is. I would want you to just add more UNPREDICTABLE to demon - that is what will really bring this character to life even more. Take 2 is way more fun - I would combine the first one with the UNPREDICTABLE that you have on the second take. then you'd have a good combination. Make sure that not EVERY line is yelled though - more dynamics. Loved your second otter the best, however the other thing to consider (that I didn't see noted in your homework) is that this is supposed to be the SAME PERSON basically but with an evil side so the person who is going to nail this audition is someone who will showcase that this is the same character with multiple personality basically. So that's the other gem to consider with this kind of direction. I would kind of combine these characters and then just give them a bit of direction to add more change ups - but loved that you're totally going for it and your homework was awesome.