Leved your slate- it was simple yet had some personality to it. You sounded confident and that you were having a great freaking time -that's the way to do it. Thank you for noting about it being for kids - this is also a note often missed by the talent. How evil can you go - well it depends on the age category etc. so that's great to hear you were considering the audience so well here. Your written homework was good because you are TOTALLY LOOKING at this in the right way. You know this is the same guy with two personalities, but don't be afraid to show him morphing into the other in the middle of a line. Everyone seems to go for FIRST CHARACTER - PAUSE - SECOND CHARACTER but this is one scene and the character morphs in the middle of it. I did get that there were the same person with a variation - for the most part - and otter was somewhat gentle, but I think if you would have had them morph into character from one to the other during WORDS, and then added a bit more gentle to otter, it would have come to life even more. GREAT INSIGHT into this project. That is what I look for the most - are you reading between the lines and paying attention to direction, not just exercise at hand. Right idea.