Hey Tim - love that you're playing with your slate - thank you so much. Once you feel even more comfortable in what you're doing and just introducing yourself to me, then it will come across even more naturally. Right now it is fun cause I can hear that you are PHYSICALLY involving yourself. that's awesome. LOVE that you're doing that....but still feels like you are working hard to get it right, vs just introducing yourself to me. Don't worry about what to ADD yet. Lets get you comfortable just having fun with your name. Answer the question - Who the hell are you? ANd. remember who you are speaking to - ME!!!! have some fun. keep trying - good stuff. Great job giving me a little moment before. LOVE IT. Love that you're working hard to give me variety as well so good work there. Now as we grow together we will add even more action to the scene and this will bring it to like even more. I love that your two characters sounded like they were the same person - that's super important in this audition so I love that. HOWEVER your otter in could afford to be even more gentle in moments.... -but his voice placement is great. Watch your character laughs - they aren't fully let go - so they sound a bit fake right now - it's not an easy task but something to keep working on.