Hey Alex - thank you so much for slating.....I want you to keep playing with it. right now you are STATING and TITLING who you are and what you are doing! I want you to answer the question - Who the hell are you? and have some fun with your response. Think of me asking you this question and respond to me personally and be super proud and honored of who you are.....GREAT OPENING - love that laugh - that's the way to bring us in. I really like your second take on both characters. I think otter needs a bit more emotional or opinionated choices/variety. Very directable characters. As we grow we will add more physical attributes to your scene so that there is even more vocal variety - that will naturally follow due to the action in the scene. Good work. The other thing to consider is that this is supposed to be the SAME PERSON basically but with an evil side so the person who is going to nail this audition is someone who will showcase that this is the same character with multiple personality basically. So that's the other gem to consider with this kind of direction