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Ha "roll for vo..." Nice energy and affect with the fear emotion. Careful that clarity doesn't get too sacrificed. You can still find the beats and time for getting your communication out cleanly. Also some more diversity of expression in that vein would keep it living and changing, helping it feel like it's happening IRL and is always adapting. DISGUST: Some really nice disgust aspects in here, again it's a balance of not letting the clarity take a back seat or the amount of mouth noise/slur the emotion wants to give take the wheel. Still warm up with over articulation (like the cork trick) to help that diction and lessen the mouth sounds that aren't helping your delivery.

Oh man I liked the delay before the good luck. Almost makes it scarier. For the second script reminded me of a little smurf character upset with us absent-minded polluters. Interesting thing you're doing with your voice, I think some times it actually less bassy! If you could sustain that it might open more character options maybe!