UNDERTALE
Maya N for Undyne
Seven. Seven human souls. With the power of seven human souls, our king... King Asgore Dreemurr... will become a god. With that power, Asgore can finally shatter the barrier. He will finally take the surface back from humanity... and give them back the suffering and pain that we have endured. [beat] Understand, human? This is your only chance at redemption. Give up your soul... or I'll tear it from your body.
We're not just going to be friends. We're going to be ... BESTIES!
OH MY GOSH!!! I'M GONNA FREAKING KILL YOU!
I love the way you portrayed her character! I also loved the how you didn't make it sound like she was yelling the entire time. I thought it sounded very nice and well thought out. Excpecially, when you were taking your time.
Thanks so much for your feedback! <3
Np :)