Trinity Recast, hopefully the last
johnlewise for James Lawson
Im looking for a commanding voice for James, something along the lines of General Ironwood from RWBY https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2LVJducnEg
Spoilers for RWBY in the link BTW
Im sure you have a lot of questions. But now is not the time for them
(Relieved) Man, we've been looking absolutely everywhere for you.
Those vile creatures show no mercy, so tell me. Why should we do the same?
I agree with the Captain over there. I would rather a word of criticism than a book of praise. Just let me know what was rough or lacking and I'll put some polish into it for you.
The tone of the voice is perfect, although, you were speaking pretty fast at some parts and for others, you put too much emphasis on certain words. And also, you were kind of quiet during a few lines. For James, he speaks slowly, and calmly, but at the same time, he remains firm and commanding. Kind of like a parent disciplining their kid. Other than that, great job!
I'll take that into account and give another tale for you.