(MUSIC COMPOSERS NEEDED!) Ruins Of Fendrel: The Dead Man's Journey | AUDIO DRAMA Pilot Episode

DmonVA for Theon Moon

DmonVA
DmonVA auditioning for Theon Moon in (MUSIC COMPOSERS NEEDED!) Ruins Of Fendrel: The Dead Man's Journey | AUDIO DRAMA Pilot Episode
Leif Inge Johnsen
Leif Inge Johnsen

Hiya! Thanks you auditioning! Here's my feedback :). I did notice in some of your lines, that you go a little too fast on some words, or stumble on them. Like the word "managed". You went quite fast and it felt more like you said "mass" and then that word just mushes in with other words in the line, "masstwo". This happens often in this audition, though sometimes you do great enunciation and pronunciation in other lines too. I know of this tongue twister that can very much help with stuff like this. It's called The Announcer's Test. Such a great tool for both warmup and for practicing enunciation. Here is a link of the document if needed (can always search it up too) https://ntaltolsstaff.weebly.com/uploads/9/8/2/3/9823767/counting_script_for_campfire.pdf That's all feedback I have for now! Again, thanks for auditioning! :)

    DmonVA
    DmonVA

    Thank you for the feedback! I really do appreciate it! Would it be alright to redo it just so I can land those lines better?

Theon Moon
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Theon Moon

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Theon Moon is the antagonist in the series. He is the leader of The Moon Family Organization.

Personality: Manipulative, controlling, witty but posh and proper. He really dislikes getting physically dirty, a germaphobe, but if things don’t go his way, he won’t hesitate to do the dirty work himself. He is all about classical music, the Victorian era. He is quite full of himself, proper and elegant, but when he gets desperate, he loses touch and can be more messy and unhinged with murderous intent. 

Voice: Smooth, elegant, medium to dark tone/pitch, gets more shaky and raspy the more unhinged he gets. 

The sides they read from:

  • *Confident, Malicious yet intrigued, smiling, but passive-aggressive on the word “bullshit”, and more malicious and threatening after ‘chuckle’ *


    “Well, well, well, aren’t you a sight for sore eyes. It was YOU, wasn’t it? It was you who somehow managed to blow up 7 of my outposts, kill 156 of my men, and write these ridiculous rebellious bullshit on the buildings of every damn city we pass through. *chuckle* Well, for the next 5 minutes, I’ll make sure you regret all of that.

  • *Disappointed, manipulative, almost mockingly, then careless “Oh Well” and a grunt when swinging his axe*


    *sigh* “You were so loyal to me, Ronny. You did everything I asked you to do, and you have been such a big part of my organization. You were like a brother to me… Oh well.” *Grunt, chops Ronny with the axe*


    *Few more swinging axe grunts 3-4 takes*


    *sigh of relief / exhaustion, confident, almost out of breath*

    “Phew! What a rush! Alright brothers, clean it up.”

  • *Unhinged, insane, trying to prove a point, desperate yet aggressive tone, shouting*


    “Can’t you see, Darian?! I built ALL of this to take people like you down to the fucking dirt! Why can't any of you see what I see?! A world that needs to be scolded! A world that needs to be PUNISHED! Someone has to do it, and that is going to be ME! AND I WON’T LET SOMEONE BY THE LIKES OF YOU GET IN MY FUCKING WAY!”

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