Hello! Thanks for auditioning! I have some few pointers to give! First, the mic is WAY TOO LOUD! It makes both your performance and the audio file quality lesser and not professional. Second, the acting felt dull and half-assed. It didn't feel like I was listening to the actual character, as it felt so out of touch. the emotions didn't feel real. From what I've heard in this audition, I recommend to lower down the gain of your mic / audio recording program, and make sure you don't peak over -10 or -6 db. And for the acting, I recommend doing more research in the "Acting" in "Voice Acting" as this is just the same as regular film and theater acting, but you are just not on the big screens and instead behind the microphone. You are still acting, just not really being physically in a scene or stage. I hope I helped you out and I wish you the best of luck in your future auditions! Have a good red of your week as well :)