Hey! Your audition is pretty good, Though It seems to be like there were too much noise reduction on the audio, reducing its quality. If you could re audition with the same audio but without the noise reduction, OR if you wanna redo the lines, that would be awesome!
Thanks for the feedback! I think I deleted the original audio, so I'll record again tonight. Due to the length of the file, I had to submit this one as an mp3, so I'll only include one take so it's a small enough wav, in case compression is worsening the issue.