GnollHack - NetHack Variant - Barbarian Quest
Jacob V. for Pelias
Race: Human
Occupation: Player's friend
Role: Quest leader
The world is in great need of your assistance, adventurer. About six months ago, I learned that a mysterious sorcerer, known as Thoth Amon, had begun to gather a large group of cutthroats and brigands about him. At about the same time, these people you once rode with, “liberated” a potent magical talisman, the Heart of Ahriman, from a Turanian caravan.
Pah! You have betrayed the gods, adventurer. You will never attain the glory which you aspire to. Your failure to follow the true path has closed this future to you.
Well done, adventurer. You have saved the world from certain doom. What, now, should be done with the Heart of Ahriman?
The volume is too low and you need to speak up. Whispering all of your lines doesn't make the scene believable enough. Also, every line has the same tone.
I will make sure to work on all of these, thank you so much for the feedback!