Hey, Max! Your audio quality is great, and I can hear you really well! There are some lines where the delivery feels a little out of place - I think mostly with the final line, "Oh, add me on social media". It might be because it's out of context, so no worries! Something that might help is imagining talking to someone in a conversation and incorporating that line at the end of your response, and then changing around the context to try out different tones and deliveries for it. I'll also work on providing more information in future casting calls, because I think it's partly on me as well. Overall, this was a great audition, thank you so much! ^-^ I'll keep you updated as the project develops. =)